06-15-2010, 09:33 PM
edge
06-16-2010, 12:15 AM
I'm assuming you are trying to play with the contrast between a Ferrari and an old person using a walker?
Good idea, but I'm not sure about the execution.
My eye keeps being drawn to the bicycle's handle rather than the car/person.
Good idea, but I'm not sure about the execution.
My eye keeps being drawn to the bicycle's handle rather than the car/person.
Sibbi
06-16-2010, 11:07 AM
[quote name='mst' date='15 June 2010 - 11:33 PM' timestamp='1276637597' post='547']
Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?
-- Markus
[/quote]
Yeah Markus - great Idea - however, I also concentrate to much on the bicycle...
Bye, Sebastian
Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?
-- Markus
[/quote]
Yeah Markus - great Idea - however, I also concentrate to much on the bicycle...
Bye, Sebastian
Guest
06-16-2010, 02:24 PM
[quote name='mst' date='15 June 2010 - 11:33 PM' timestamp='1276637597' post='547']
Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?
![[Image: gallery_5414_23_221784.jpg]](http://forum.photozone.de/uploads/1276171456/gallery_5414_23_221784.jpg)
-- Markus
[/quote]
No; It's hard to see that the red thing is a Ferrari. The bicycle is very distracting. There's a lot of other clutter (the shadow, the other cars). A more front-on picture with a slightly lower angle would make the Ferrari more obvious and less like a mistake, as well as remove some of the distractions.
-Lars
Reflection in a store window in my home town. Does this work for you?
![[Image: gallery_5414_23_221784.jpg]](http://forum.photozone.de/uploads/1276171456/gallery_5414_23_221784.jpg)
-- Markus
[/quote]
No; It's hard to see that the red thing is a Ferrari. The bicycle is very distracting. There's a lot of other clutter (the shadow, the other cars). A more front-on picture with a slightly lower angle would make the Ferrari more obvious and less like a mistake, as well as remove some of the distractions.
-Lars
DonAndre
06-17-2010, 08:47 PM
Great juxtaposition! Perfect.