Since noone commented so far, I will just add my 2cts ...
Technically, I believe that f/16 is already too much ,,, but the
effect will only be visible if you print large or view in full
resolution. ... I had taken f/11 on a crop-1.6 in order to
keep diffraction effects limited.
The raw conversion is done nicely, there is structure in the
dark areas as well as in the sky.
The layout suffers (in my opinion) a bit from the
centric positioning of the sun ... you have
placed the horizon somewhere near the golden ration ...
why not do the same with the sun. (a bit more on the
right would have been nice)
Just some thoughts ... Rainer
Technically, I believe that f/16 is already too much ,,, but the
effect will only be visible if you print large or view in full
resolution. ... I had taken f/11 on a crop-1.6 in order to
keep diffraction effects limited.
The raw conversion is done nicely, there is structure in the
dark areas as well as in the sky.
The layout suffers (in my opinion) a bit from the
centric positioning of the sun ... you have
placed the horizon somewhere near the golden ration ...
why not do the same with the sun. (a bit more on the
right would have been nice)
Just some thoughts ... Rainer