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[mst]

How to improve? You must be kidding, that's a very nice shot.



-- Markus

[Rainer]

Well, its (as so often) in the eye of the beholder ...

... nevertheless, as the picture is right now, it does

not work for me ... over 70 percent just void dark space

and a tiny little spot of engagement ... that's more like

"meet the girl from the excort service for the night after

a long and boring day in the office" to me.



Do something with the empty space ... two rings, some

flowers ... or enlarge the image in the void.



Just my 2cts ... Rainer

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[quote name='Rainer' timestamp='1339709288' post='18902']

Well, its (as so often) in the eye of the beholder ...

... nevertheless, as the picture is right now, it does

not work for me ... over 70 percent just void dark space

and a tiny little spot of engagement ... that's more like

"meet the girl from the excort service for the night after

a long and boring day in the office" to me.



Do something with the empty space ... two rings, some

flowers ... or enlarge the image in the void.



Just my 2cts ... Rainer

[/quote]



I got you, thanks! I will keep on eye an the background next time!

[obsoquasi]

I like the idea a lot, however the poses suggest inverted male/female role models - which is okay if you actually intended it.

[haring]

Thanks so much!