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The first one for critique
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Very good! I like very much the bushes on the bottom, that to me appear as if they were below the sea, like corals. This is actually pretty funny given that they are in some way "below" the sea. The image has some kind of "aquarium" feel to it (but maybe it's also my crappy laptop monitor).



The only improvement I could suggest would have been to walk a little to the left and hold more to the right so that you get a little bit more sea on the right side and less of that shadow on the left side. But that's probably being overly critical.

If you don't mind cloning, the lower right edge could need some more bushes.



Could you provide a little more details on the shot? Did you use a polarizer?
  


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The first one for critique - by Sibbi - 06-03-2010, 03:34 PM
The first one for critique - by DonAndre - 06-03-2010, 07:08 PM
The first one for critique - by Sibbi - 06-03-2010, 08:43 PM
The first one for critique - by wim - 06-03-2010, 08:52 PM
The first one for critique - by vincenzo555 - 06-04-2010, 01:40 AM
The first one for critique - by Sibbi - 06-04-2010, 05:37 AM
The first one for critique - by Sibbi - 06-04-2010, 05:48 AM
The first one for critique - by allanmb - 06-04-2010, 08:08 AM
The first one for critique - by Reinier - 06-04-2010, 01:44 PM
The first one for critique - by Rainer - 06-04-2010, 02:40 PM
The first one for critique - by Guest - 06-05-2010, 12:53 AM

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