Distortion results say "24mm" on the tabs... I know this is a "24mm equivalent" lens but still. 
Also there's a line "although the quality plateau is very broad from f2/8" in the resolution section - I think you forgot a period there and subbed a slash for it.
Re: the lens - somehow I expected more... (although I wouldn't say that "the corner quality falls apart" like you did - the corners look like they're solidly in the "Fair" part of the graph; while it isn't saying much, they're not dropping below the lowest line like they do on some lenses, especially FF ones).
Also there's a line "although the quality plateau is very broad from f2/8" in the resolution section - I think you forgot a period there and subbed a slash for it.
Re: the lens - somehow I expected more... (although I wouldn't say that "the corner quality falls apart" like you did - the corners look like they're solidly in the "Fair" part of the graph; while it isn't saying much, they're not dropping below the lowest line like they do on some lenses, especially FF ones).